American here. Did I do cheese and pickle sandwich right?

It's... OK. I've been wanting to try it out for the longest time.

I used white sandwich bread, original Branston pickle, and sharp cheddar slices.

Have I done right? How can I improve?

It's... OK. I've been wanting to try it out for the longest time.

I used white sandwich bread, original Branston pickle, and sharp cheddar slices.

Have I done right? How can I improve?