Looking for Feedback

Hi! I’m a cinematographer based in Mumbai, India, and I’ve learned so much from the advice and insights shared in this subreddit, I’d like to contribute by sharing a commercial I recently shot for Schweppes. I’d love to hear your thoughts and feedback on this piece, it would mean a lot to me as I continue honing my craft.

Thank you in advance!

Camera - Sony fx6 Lens - Zeiss Ultra Prime Lens set