Is my first Hebrew writing a bit okay?
"Hello everyone! I’m preparing for my first Hanukkah, and I’ve been trying to write a positive message in Hebrew on a piece of paper. I don’t know the Hebrew cursive script, so I wrote it using the regular printed letters. The first word doesn’t look so great, and I only realized that now, but I think I managed to write 3 words quite well. I wanted to ask what you think of it and if you have any suggestions for improvement
"Hello everyone! I’m preparing for my first Hanukkah, and I’ve been trying to write a positive message in Hebrew on a piece of paper. I don’t know the Hebrew cursive script, so I wrote it using the regular printed letters. The first word doesn’t look so great, and I only realized that now, but I think I managed to write 3 words quite well. I wanted to ask what you think of it and if you have any suggestions for improvement