Notation Help Follow-Up
Thanks for everyone's help yesterday. As a follow-up, is the notation below understandable? Is there anything that would make it better/clearer? Again, this is for a musical, so I do want every measure charted out. I also wanted it as clean as possible, so I put drums in one voice, and cymbals/hat in another voice to avoid as many rests as possible (as suggested by someone here). Take it easy on me, I don't read music. Thanks everyone!
